Reflections

  • December 20, 2011

    the debut of this new picture book. Jessica Meserve's art is fabulous and adds so much to the storyline. ONE SPECIAL DAY is about a young boy who is wild, loud, strong and free until something happens in his life and he decides to add a few new behaviors. Published by Hyperion. Watch for it in March!

    12/20/2011
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  • December 14, 2011

    I so enjoyed pulling books off the shelf yesterday that I continued for part of the night and a little bit this morning. As promised, here is a list of books that I sometimes use to teach the main craft elements. As you can see, many of the same titles appear on list after list. That's because a strong mentor text will offer its reader great word choice, details, organization and voice. It's what makes good literature stand out. Since craft is the way we link words together to create meaning, the best literature exemplifies attention to craft in several areas.

    Remember, read all mentor text in its entirety at least once to the class for pure enjoyment. Later, only use a small part of the text as an example of ONE craft element. Read it to the students, discuss it and then experiment with it. This can happen during a mini-lesson, during a conference, or simply during reading workshop to reinforce the reading process, as well. Writers are great readers and readers are great writers.

    Not only can literature be used to teach these major craft elements, but it can be a source of mini-lessons and conversations for how to title a piece, noticing the use of repeating refrains, how to craft leads or endings, the blending of narrative features in nonfiction text, etc. And if you want to integrate the teaching of grammar and punctuation into writing workshop, read Jeff Anderson's books - Everyday Editing and Mechanically Inclined - to learn how to lift "mentor sentences" from literature.

    That's the thing about good books - they are our best co-teachers during writing workshop. Cheers!

    PS If you're not aware, the post before this one lists choices of mentor texts for genre. Enjoy!

    Craft

    Focus – books with an easy focus to identify
    Just One Bite – Lola Schaefer
    Friends – Catherine Thimmesh
    Little Dog Poems – Kristine O’Connell George
    The Quiet Book – Deborah Underwood
    What’s Up, What’s Down – Lola Schaefer
    Subway Ride – Heather Lynn Miller
    Nine O’Clock Lullaby – Marilyn Singer
    Scaredy Squirrel – Melanie Watt
    One Is a Snail, Ten Is a Crab – April Pulley Sayre
    Flight – Robert Burleigh
    How to Clean a Hippopotamus – Steve Jenkins
    My Name is Georgia – Jeanette Winter
    Rosa’s Bus – Jo Kittinger
    Now & Ben – Gene Barretta
    Wanted the Perfect Pet – Fiona Roberton
    Freedom Summer – Deborah Wiles

    Word Choice
    All the World – Liz Garton
    A House Is a House for Me – Mary Ann Hoberman
    Fletcher and the Falling Leaves – Julia Rawlinson
    Grandad’s Fishing Buddy – Mary Quigley
    Over and Under the Snow - Kate Messner
    Rosa’s Bus – Jo Kittinger
    Canoe Days – Gary Paulsen (coined words in use)
    Thesaurus Rex – Laya Steinberg
    Max’s Words – Kate Banks
    Weaving the Rainbow – George Ella Lyon
    The Boy Who Loved Words – Roni Schotter
    14 Cows for America – Carmen Agra Deedy
    Freedom Summer – Deborah Wiles
    Yatandou – Gloria Whelan
    My Uncle Martin’s Big Heart – Angela Farris Watkins
    When Marian Sang – Pam Munoz Ryan
    Ubiquitous – Joyce Sidman
    Arrowhawk – Lola Schaefer
    Earth: Feeling the Heat – Brenda Z. Guiberson
    well written poetry

    Detail
    When I Was Young in the Mountains – Cynthia Rylant
    When the Relatives Came – Cynthia Rylant
    Weaving the Rainbow – George Ella Lyon
    Never Smile At a Monkey – Steve Jenkins
    All the Places to Love – Pat MacLachlan
    Over and Under the Snow - Kate Messner
    Grandpa’s Fishing Buddy – Mary Quigley
    Freedom Summer – Deborah Wiles
    Rosa’s Bus – Jo Kittinger
    Twilight Comes Twice – Ralph Fletcher
    When Marian Sang – Pam Munoz Ryan
    I Dream of Trains – Angela Johnson
    14 Cows For America – Carmen Agra Deedy
    A Good Night for Freedom – Barbara Olenyik Morrow
    Two Bobbies – Kirby Larson and Mary Nethery
    My Uncle Martin’s Big Heart – Angela Farris Watkins
    Thomas Jefferson – James Cross Giblin
    The Secret World of Walter Anderson – Hester Bass
    A River of Words – Jen Bryant
    Ubiquitous – Joyce Sidman
    Selected entries from any of the My Name is America journals
    selected passages from well-written novels

    Organization
    A Good Day – Kevin Henkes
    Diary of Worm (Spider, Fly) – Doreen Cronin
    Tomorrow’s Alphabet – George Shannon
    Just One Bite – Lola Schaefer
    The Quiet Book – Deborah Underwood
    What’s Up, What’s Down – Lola Schaefer
    Nine O’Clock Lullaby – Marilyn Singer
    Flight – Robert Burleigh
    Rosa’s Bus – Jo Kittinger
    Shark vs. Train – Chris Barton
    Trout Are Made of Trees – April Pulley Sayre
    This is the Sunflower – Lola Schaefer
    Scaredy Squirrel – Melanie Watt
    Now & Ben – Gene Baretta
    Freedom Summer – Deborah Wiles
    Earth: Feeling the Heat – Brenda Z. Guiberson
    I Wanna New Room – Karen Kaufman Orloff
    Ubiquitous – Joyce Sidman

    Elaboration (books with figurative language, show, don’t tell, and wonderful description)
    Lilly’s Purple Plastic Purse - Kevin Henkes
    Oliver Finds His Way – Phyllis Root
    Over and Under the Snow - Kate Messner
    Granddad’s fishing Buddy – Mary Quigley
    Rosa’s Bus – Jo Kittinger
    Weaving the Rainbow – George Ella Lyon
    The Firekeeper’s Son – Linda Sue Park
    A Good Night for Freedom – Barbara Olenyik Morrow
    Two Bobbies – Kirby Larson and Mary Nethery
    When Marian Sang – Pam Munoz Ryan
    Freedom Summer – Deborah Wiles
    The Secret World of Water Anderson – Hester Bass
    The Butterfly – Patricia Polacco
    Yatandou – Gloria Whelan

    Voice
    If You Were Born a Kitten – Marion Dane Bauer
    Diary of a Worm (Spider, Fly) – Doreen Cronin
    Scaredy Squirrel – Melanie Watt
    Waiting for Wings – Lois Ehlert
    Bubba and Beau – Kathi Appelt
    All the Places to Love – Patricia MacLachlan
    Rudi’s Pond – Eve Bunting
    Weaving the Rainbow – George Ella Lyon
    The Firekeeper’s Son – Linda Sue Park
    All the Water in the World – George Ella Lyon
    I Dream of Trains – Angela Johnson
    My Name is Sangoel – Karen Lynn Williams and Khadra Mohammed
    When Marian Sang – Pam Munoz Ryan
    Living Sunlight – Molly Bang & Penny Chisholm
    Swamp Angel – Anne Isaacs
    The Dunderheads – Paul Fleischman
    Yatandou – Gloria Whelan
    Diary of a Wimpy Kid – Jeff Kinney
    Hope Was Here – Joan Bauer
    Sahara Special – Esme Raji Codell
    The Dreamer – Pam Munoz Ryan

    12/20/2011
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  • December 13, 2011

    Inevitably when I visit a school and offer demonstration lessons in genre or craft, I have teachers ask me for a list of mentor text that I use regularly. My pat response in past years has been, "Oh, I have books that I enjoy, but you need to find books that speak to you - that are good models for your students." I always share the titles that I have brought with me that day and sometimes will email off a few others. But I'm beginning to realize that as more and more new content and additions to the curriculum are thrown at teachers they don't have a lot of time to peruse bookstores and libraries. And, since many of our large chain bookstores don't even carry a wide selection of picture books - some of the best mentor text IMHO - it's difficult for teachers to even FIND good books to read and evaluate.

    So my Christmas present to all readers is twofold this year. First, today I'm posting a list of books that I enjoy as mentor text for genre. Is this a complete list of all books published that could work for these different genres? Of course not. It's a somewhat thorough list of my favorites. I have more, but these are the books I tend to take with me to school after school. When the list is a bit longer I've organized more appropriate titles for primary grades near the top half and titles for intermediate or middle school grades near the second half. Although I have to say that I use most titles freely from grades K through 8. A good book models excellent writing for all ages, even adults.

    Today's post is the first of two. By year's end I'll post again with a list of books that I like to use for the craft of writing - focus, word choice, organization, details, elaboration, show, don't tell, voice, etc.

    And if you decide to mark this post in your favorites, I will return to both lists from time to time and update with new titles that I add to my collection.

    I hope this helps many of you in some small way. Merry Christmas!

    Persuasive
    I Wanna Iguana - Karen Kaufman Orloff
    I Wanna New Room – Karen Kaufman Orloff
    The Gruffalo – Julia Donaldson
    My Lucky Day – Keiko Kasza
    Dear Mrs. LaRue - Mark Teague

    Cumulative Story
    The Napping House – Audrey and Don Wood
    This is the Sunflower – Lola Schaefer
    This is the Rain – Lola Schaefer
    Pond Circle – Betsy Franco
    The House that Jack Built – Jeanette Winter
    This is the Feast – Diane Z. Shore

    Terse Verse
    Puffins Climb, Penguins Rhyme – Bruce McMillan
    An Island Grows – Lola Schaefer

    Personal Narrative
    Selected entries from . . .
    Diary of a Worm (Spider, Fly) – Doreen Cronin (for primary)
    Selected pages from
    When The Relatives Came - Cynthia Rylant
    When I Was Young in the Mountains - Cynthia Rylant
    Selected Passages from
    My Uncle Martin’s Big Heart – Angela Farris Watkins
    Selected entries from any of the
    My Name is America (A Dear America) Journals (intermediate)

    The Journal of William Thomas Emerson
    The Journal of James Edmond Pease
    The Journal of Joshua Loper
    The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung
    The Journal of Sean Sullivan
    The Journal of Augustus Pelletier

    Narrative – Story Structure
    Dog and Bear – Laura Vaccaro Seeger
    Frog and Toad – Arnold Lobel
    Mittens – Lola Schaefer
    Oliver Finds His Way – Phyllis Root
    The Firekeeper’s Son – Linda Sue Park
    Widget – Lyn Rossiter McFarland
    Frankie Stein – Lola Schaefer
    Wanted the Perfect Pet – Fiona Roberton
    The Dunderheads – Paul Fleischman
    The Plot Chickens – Mary Jane and Herm Auch

    Narrative Nonfiction
    First the Egg – Laura Vaccaro Seeger
    What is Science – Rebecca Kai Dotlich
    Compost Stew – Mary McKenna Siddals
    Actual Size – Steve Jenkins
    Just One Bite – Lola Schaefer
    This is the Rain – Lola Schaefer
    Trout Are Made of Trees – April Pulley Sayre
    One Is a Snail, Ten Is a Crab – April Pulley Sayre
    Waiting for Wings – Lois Ehlert
    Now & Ben – Gene Baretta
    Neo Leo – Gene Baretta
    Rosa’s Bus – Jo Kittinger
    The Shocking Truth about Energy – Loreen Leedy
    This Is Your Life Cycle – Heather Lynn Miller
    A River of Words – Jen Bryant
    Almost Gone – Steve Jenkins
    An Island Grows – Lola Schaefer
    We Planted a Tree – Diane Muldrow
    Pond Circle – Betsy Franco
    All the Water in the World – George Ella Lyon
    A Butterfly is Patient – Dianna Hutts Aston
    How To Clean a Hippopotamus – Steve Jenkins
    Living Sunlight – Molly Bang & Penny Chisholm
    The Boy Who Invented TV – Kathleen Krull
    Down Down Down - Steve Jenkins
    Flight – Robert Burleigh
    The Secret World of Walter Anderson – Hester Bass
    Ubiquitous – Joyce Sidman
    Earth: Feeling the Heat – Brenda Z. Guiberson

    Poetry
    Lots of Spots – Lois Ehlert
    All the World – Liz Garton
    Give Yourself to the Rain – Margaret Wise Brown
    I’m Small – Lilian Moore
    Button Up – Alice Schertle
    In the Swim – Doug Florian
    Lemonade Sun – Rebecca Kai Dotlich
    All the Small Poems – Valerie Worth
    Joyful Noise – Paul Fleischman
    Hailstones and Halibut Bones – Mary O’Neill
    Fold Me A Poem – Kristine O’Connell George
    You Read to Me, I’ll Read to You – Mary Ann Hoberman
    Lives: Poems About Famous Americans – Lee Bennett Hopkins
    Earthshake – Lisa Westberg Peters
    Amazing Faces – Lee Bennett Hopkins
    Old Elm Speaks – Kristine O’Connell George
    Butterfly Eyes and Other Secrets of the Meadow – Joyce Sidman
    Swimming Upstream: Middle School Poems – Kristine O’Connell George
    A Maze Me – Naomi Shihab Nye
    Seeing the Blue Between – Paul B. Janeczko
    Love That Dog – Sharon Creech
    Hate That Cat – Sharon Creech

    Unusual Text Structures
    Oral Story Telling – What If – Laura Vaccaro Seeger
    Short Plays – Full Moon and Star by Lee Bennett Hopkins
    Two-part Story – Interrupting Chicken – David Ezra Stein
    Poems to be read up and down – Mirror Mirror - Marilyn Singer
    Two part debate – Shark vs. Train – Chris Barton
    Riddles about children’s books – Spot the Plot – J. Patrick Lewis

    12/20/2011
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  • October 29, 2011

    Many authors are entering e-book publishing and I'm one of them. That doesn't mean I know exactly what's happening with all of these digital apps, but I'm more than happy to expand my readership. MITTENS the kitten (HarperCollins I Can Read Books) now has five titles in print and in e-books. This past week I was contacted by blogger Karleen Tauszik. She told me that HAPPY HALLOWEEN, MITTENS has been selling quite well as an e-book and asked me for an interview. I was happy to answer her questions and here is a link to her blog. I hope everyone has a scary Halloween and holidays filled with family and friends. http://www.kidsebookbestsellers.com/2011/10/happy-halloween-from-bestsel...

    10/29/2011
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  • October 17, 2011

    Just spent two wonderful days in Birmingham, AL at the SCBWI-Southern Breeze Writing and Illustrating for Kids Conference (WIK, 2011). It's exciting to meet and speak with people of all ages who want to contribute to our current wealth of children's literature. On Friday, I offered a full day intensive on revising the picture book to 43 men and women. We laughed, read, wrote, revised, compared, improved and celebrated growth in our scripts. On Saturday, a large crowd of editors, agents, writers, illustrators, an art director and learners gathered at a high school for inspiration, information, critiques and more. Every aspect of both days was seamless thanks to the detail-oriented planning of the Southern Breeze officers. Every writer, no matter how many published credits, or not, is a learner. We grow by reading the best books, discussing strategies, experimenting, revising, receiving rejections, pushing forward and finding the most important stories that we need to tell with our own original approach and voice. It's a wild and satisfying journey - one that I was pleased to share with kind colleagues for a few hours this weekend. Thank you.

    10/17/2011
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